a shadow of a man
that fills in
I can relate to that recently I think I know what your saying
thanks Bruce for understanding
This writing can be taken in so many different ways and it’s exhilarating!!! I love that you specifically wrote, “..a shadow of man.” and I noticed you didn’t put (of a man) to me that makes me think of “society” that most of us struggle against. You used only 15 words and with that in mind…this is only one of my views in which I ponder regarding “he is”. Rock on, my friend!
wow, I am so pleased with your lovely comment. I have to admit, that I used “shadow of man” (not “a man”) because I forgot to type “a” (which I am going to fix now. Sometimes it is quite difficult for me to write in English, as it is just not my foreign language. Very often I am not even aware that my writing can be taken in various ways 🙂
That is even cool’er! You write beautifully no matter and SO uber cool how placements of words can open a vibrant rainbow of thoughts!
agree! words, how we use them plus who read them – it will always be a different interpretation 🙂 which, as you said is SO uber cool 😀
LOL!!! indeed! Uber Cool !!!
This is quite provocative poojy ~ makes me wonder about this “shadow of a man” who has taken up some space in you…. Wonderful write!! xo
Thank you so much Robyn! I have to say that it makes me wonder as well, this “shadow of a man” 🙂
You wrote “shadow of man” I can’t wait to read your responses, to get your take. A great writer brings forth many ideas from their readers and I love this because you have done, just that!
I think I wanted to express my deep desire for being with a man who, together with me, creates one… an illusionary hope for true love. So he is a shadow as I haven’t met him yet 🙂
Beautiful!!!!! My friend! And oooh la la sexy sexy, I likey!!!
heh! or maybe… I do know him and can’t see that he is him, lol 🙂
Ah Haaaaa…you must give us more via poetry! hehehe!
I should then, heh 😀
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