wriggle
said the curly toes oh
what a day weโve had
fine-enough that we spent the day
in filmy-whitey stockings
for we are young and
although we are cramped and sweat
just a little we still press
against the image and slightly
bend at the knuckle and we are
always upturned at the end but
then
we were dropped in a tank
all filled with swirling air and
furnished as a Louis XIV ante-room
where we hung inquisitive and silent
for an exquisite epoch while the
bluelight held no time of the day
shush
my little ones said the model youโve had a busy day
settle down now for we have more time
tomorrow
well, this had a bit of formatting in it, which of course didn’t manifest in this reply box, but imagine the single-word lines ‘tabulated’ and also ‘time’ boldened because it is the title …
Way COOL!!!
oh yes! I like this photo so much. when you look at it, you can relate to so many things… ๐
OHhhhhhh goodness, I’m seeing the photo on a big screen now! (before I was looking at it off my tiny phone), YES, this is even cooler than COOL !!!!
really happy to know that ๐
– GReat image – Sending Love sweetie – and more prayers your way ~ oo
Thank you love for a support, I am finding a stillness and calmness within me, which I think is good… acceptance is somewhere here… xxo
Thank you for sharing this whimsical image. It took my breath away!
I like this photo – strangely – very much ๐
I started a poem for this picture today, I’ll let you know how it turns out
please do! and good luck with finishing it. somehow I know it will be great! ๐
time
wriggle
said the curly toes oh
what a day weโve had
fine-enough that we spent the day
in filmy-whitey stockings
for we are young and
although we are cramped and sweat
just a little we still press
against the image and slightly
bend at the knuckle and we are
always upturned at the end but
then
we were dropped in a tank
all filled with swirling air and
furnished as a Louis XIV ante-room
where we hung inquisitive and silent
for an exquisite epoch while the
bluelight held no time of the day
shush
my little ones said the model youโve had a busy day
settle down now for we have more time
tomorrow
well, this had a bit of formatting in it, which of course didn’t manifest in this reply box, but imagine the single-word lines ‘tabulated’ and also ‘time’ boldened because it is the title …
It’s wonderful. I am pending on it right now ๐ thanks for sharing! ๐
Omg, you did an amazing work here! I love it ๐ So happy that could give you some inspiration ๐
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